astroid said: there's something kinda clumsy sounding about the hihat clankz
but when it drops into the beat, it's ssexxxxxxy.
i'd fuck around with some soloistic type biz on a ride cymbal instead of a hihat, and complement it with some very dissonant rhodes stabz and reverb tweakz.
if it's jazz, make it a touch more on the tony williams side, where the ride is a lead.
those are just first feelings. oh, and don't be afraid of the "tritone sub" or the sus 4 paralellogram. how about a chord solo on the guit? you got the sex for that.
i kinda like the 'weak' ending tho.. kinda like sex is sometimes.. starts out good, then you're like.. oh.. that was kinda a weak ending.. then u just go eat some icecream.