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old song, reworked.
need all sorts of advice on it.
anything is fair game.
pls help.
thx
version 2: link
new intro, new mix a bit, new elec piano bits, new synthy middle fx
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wow that was a wierd f'en trip, man! i'm serious. cause like, you give me one wikipedia article, especially on something that i have a little bit of interest in, and i find myself in the strangest of internet hideouts. man, oh man, i was away for a good four listens of your track, man! serious, that's a lot of porn history. so like, ya, the song went beautifully with my adventures. (no, i didn't perform autofallacio or even cum, sorry.)
HOWEVER, when i started this song, i was like, "omg, it's so slow and so chill," almost like on the verge of like, cheesy, ya know? but then, upon drifting off into porno-world i discovered that this music is really quite perfect. i wouldn't even recommend a thing. the songs really nice.
i think the problem with me personally is that when i click these links to these songs, it's so expectant. 100% of my attention is directed to them, and my ears turn super-critical. i think that's most unfortunate. it's not like i can't enjoy or absorb the music and still be just letting it flow - whatever it is. i dunno, that's my problem i guess. dig the song, didn't think i did (mostly because you wrote it you dick), but i do.
OH RIGHT, what do i like. shit i hate this part. i love the piano the most, the rhodes, rather. i love it with the percussion. ya, it's been done a lot - but for a REASON, right? you did it well, and i dig it with the electro hats, it's a nice flavor. the atmospheric stuff works really well with it, but believe it or not - and this goes against what celibacyclub said, i would almost recommend making it cleaner. i dunno, maybe not - but just a thought. like, it's almost like this song is trying to be two things at once, ya dig? it's super chill and easy, but then it's like a hint of MEAN, no this is me being too critical again. never mind. i take it back. no i don't. i wanna hear a super clean version, AND a super dirty version. no, i wanna hear a super DUPER dirty beginning, then a slow tranition into super duper clean.
i LOVE those ambient fx that sound like backwards stuff, the delayed backwards stuff. 4:15 +
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whoa whoa whoa, i take that back... i wanna hear it super CLEAN and THEN super duper dirty. like it starts off with wine, right? ya, it starts off with wine, and a nice evening, and comfortable longing, right? and then you start to get into it right? and then you know, the nipples come out, and all of a sudden WHOA things are changing right? AND BOOM, things start to get NASTY before you know it your banging this HARD AND LOUD and OOH OOHHH OHHHHHHHH and then....... ahhhh you feel so much better +
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/me lights up a cigarette
"was it good for you, jdg? how does your ass feel? hurt a little?"
"it's alright, nothing new - you know." +
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its good, i really liked the ambientish starting, but the bongos or what ever they are, have to simple of a beat
its just my opinion
i liked music really mixed up +
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I loves the lushness and the smoke dubbed production. I admit the straight up Rhodes piano portion in the beginning is beyond me (old bias) but I loved everything else.
The piece is great as is. Maybe I'd want more variation in the percussion sounds but whatever. If I were to direct a remix I'd go for something completely beatless and play up more of the floaty dream sequences. +
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mmm yeah put some porn woman sounds in this.
commenting on songs is difficult with a computer screen with others comments and descritions and stuff. i think the best way to evaluate a song is to burn it to cd and listen in the car. that takes a while though. +
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p.s. I like the drunk hobo symth. +
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needs serious cliche whawha behind da congas, more noise and crackle noise. and plugin you Trash delay.
oh there's Trash... I hear it now, you didn't forget +
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jebus.
ok doots. +
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your music is very strange, it's timeless like it could have been made on 78, 85, 96 or tomorrow, production is peak, music is really nice, structure is superb, i love the more quiet moments...i like your weird music a lot man. +
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jdg said: great TIPS mlayered.
perfect
i give you big reverse hug
you are only saying that because you know when he hugs you back he will be grabing your man-boobs. you guy are filthy whores! +
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damn! Ron Jeremy used to be seeeexxyyyyyy!
Sleek and cool. I almost thought it was a bit cliché at first with the pads (I'm not a huge fan of pads), but then your rhytmic and musical touches are so sharp and intelligent, and your keys solo so sexy... You are the master lubricator! +
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so, the key solo is OK?
it replaces a guitar solo of 'so-so' quality.. with this 'so-so' quality key solo..
hmm
anyone else up or down on the key solo?
and ron jeremy.. man.. he got fat and ugly.. in the late 70s.. he was the doot +
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