Ron Jeremy was on Vegas last night  

for realz? link  

NICE

minor thought: you into the song with two different rbeakbeats before any regular bet is established (those congas, and then the swingtime shaker) I say one is enuff.

I might even open the song with that Rhodesy sound, not the beat. Its more interesting and likely to draw the lisdtener in... and I wish that came back at the end instead of the plinky piano... plinky piano gots no heuvos

I love the detuned hi hat or whatever it is... a snare?

I also love the backwards stuff at the end, run thru fwd delay. Excellent.
I rate you bad, because bad ratings are the new good.  

yeah, he played the role of a Porn Star.

Show highlite was mention of film "Lawrence of a Labia"  

great TIPS mlayered.

perfect
i give you big reverse hug  

Teh beat and teh bass is radness, excellent tight play of rhythms with the more staccato melodic stuff

I don't like the big dubby delay on the piano samples at the start, too much juice, too soon.

Also, the big fuzzy synth pad that comes in halfway through is like a fat hobo who drank too much and collapsed your porch--big and lazy and even though he takes up space he doesn't add much. Except some smellage. Maybe break it up, filter out the highs, something.

Also, as with his rating, take the inverse of mlbot's comments as a real measure of what you oughta do.

edited: 06 Dec 2005   

the loungy perc is dope  

great ideas!
that fuzzy synth used to be mellotron strings.. i totally was wondering about them.. since i just re-tracked that part today. .. ... .....

u guys are so hot  

OMG TEH HEDGEHOG!!!!!!!

When I saw the pic and read the name I knew it for sure.

I'll be back to listen I just had to give you big ups for the Hedgehog.  

too clean,

like the rhoads sound. drums are kinda plain.

does sound a bit pornish.

i dont know how realistic these sugestions are but here goes:
1. i'd say change the synth pad sound to something a bit more distorted and droney.
2. make the begining more duby like the second half.
3. have some stuff thats got different quantise values, some little tatatata parts to make some contrast and movement in the track.

hmm. maybe thats just instuctions on how to make a celibacyclub track. sorry.  

pls explain this part?  

good track... i don't like telling people how to write their own music, but some of the suggestions above might be worth trying.

i wish i had a picture of my dad on this computer. he looks almost exactly like ron jeremy, with a twist of mario. you'd laugh yr ass off.  

like say your drums are falling on 16ths mostly, maybe have some do some 32nd stuff from time to time. im not saying make it idm-y, just have some closer together drum hits and/or synth bits occastionally.

i dont know music terms so well. you'd think i would have learned by now.  

yes, i know wot u mean now  

my dad looks just like sadam husain! (no joke)